连写句(run-on sentence)不只是“很长的句子”。它是把两个(或更多)完整的句子挤在一起,中间缺少本该把它们分开的标点。

什么是连写句? #

I finished the report I sent it to my manager.

I finished the report 和 I sent it to my manager 都是完整的句子。它们之间没有任何分隔,读者读到这里就会卡住。

与它很相近的是逗号拼接(comma splice),也就是只用一个逗号连接两个句子。可以阅读什么是逗号拼接。

长句不等于连写句 #

下面这个长句不是连写句,因为它连接得正确:

Although the deadline was tight and the team was small, we finished the report, checked every number, and sent it to the client before noon.

改正连写句的 4 种方法 #

1. 加句号。

I finished the report. I sent it to my manager.

2. 加分号。

I finished the report; I sent it to my manager.

3. 加逗号和连词(and, but, so, or, yet)。

I finished the report, and I sent it to my manager.

4. 改写句子,让其中一部分从属于另一部分。

After I finished the report, I sent it to my manager.

如何识别连写句 #

读句子时,找出新的主语和动词开始的地方(I sent、she said、it was)。如果它和前面的部分之间没有任何分隔,你就找到了一个连写句。

常见的连写句 #

连写句 改正后
It's late we should go. It's late. We should go.
I called her she didn't answer. I called her, but she didn't answer.
The app is great I use it daily. The app is great; I use it daily.

让 AI 帮你理顺 #

AI Grammar Checker 会找出连写句,并正确地拆分或连接它们;再检查一次,还能得到更流畅的改写。