连写句(run-on sentence)不只是“很长的句子”。它是把两个(或更多)完整的句子挤在一起,中间缺少本该把它们分开的标点。
什么是连写句? #
I finished the report I sent it to my manager.
I finished the report 和 I sent it to my manager 都是完整的句子。它们之间没有任何分隔,读者读到这里就会卡住。
与它很相近的是逗号拼接(comma splice),也就是只用一个逗号连接两个句子。可以阅读什么是逗号拼接。
长句不等于连写句 #
下面这个长句不是连写句,因为它连接得正确:
Although the deadline was tight and the team was small, we finished the report, checked every number, and sent it to the client before noon.
改正连写句的 4 种方法 #
1. 加句号。
I finished the report. I sent it to my manager.
2. 加分号。
I finished the report; I sent it to my manager.
3. 加逗号和连词(and, but, so, or, yet)。
I finished the report, and I sent it to my manager.
4. 改写句子,让其中一部分从属于另一部分。
After I finished the report, I sent it to my manager.
如何识别连写句 #
读句子时,找出新的主语和动词开始的地方(I sent、she said、it was)。如果它和前面的部分之间没有任何分隔,你就找到了一个连写句。
常见的连写句 #
| 连写句 | 改正后 |
|---|---|
| It's late. We should go. | |
| I called her, but she didn't answer. | |
| The app is great; I use it daily. |
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